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MensagemAssunto: Detention - SasuSaku   Ter Nov 10, 2009 8:40 pm

Esta fanfic teve algum sucesso no Fanfiction por isso decidi postá-la aqui ^^ (fui eu que a fiz!). É SasuSaku (Sasuke - Sakura) por isso quem não gosta do par não leia. Ou leia... XD Tem 3 capítulos mas vou postar um de cada vez para poderem ir comentando um a um! Obrigada!Very Happy

Summary: Sakura was having a bad day. What can happen in an apparently innocent detention to change that?

Disclamer: Nope, still do not own Naruto... I'm trying... Seriously!

...........................................................................................................Capítulo I....................................................................................................

The clock in Haruno Sakura bed side table read 07:30am and Sakura was fast asleep. She had been up all night finishing some school work for her Genjutso class. Sensei Kurenai can be very strict sometimes… Sakura was the top student in the class and had always great marks but one subject that she hated was Literature, her teacher was the legendary senin Jiraya and, for her dismay, he kept on teaching every class that perverted book of his. She was supposed to start classes at 08:00am, so you can tell that she was getting late and her mother too.

‘Sakura!! Wake up! It’s getting late!’ – yelled her mother from downstairs.

Sakura let out a groan and rolled to the other side of the bed, which didn’t have an other side because it was a single bed, making her fall from it with a loud ‘thud’ carrying the sheets with her. Sakura hated being woke up by her mother, who has an unusual hyper mood in the morning. Sakura opened her eyes slowly and looked at the clock. It read 07:47am.

‘AHH!! I’m gonna be late!!’

She put on the first thing that she saw, washed herself and brushed her hair, rushed downstairs, grabbed a piece of buttered toast, kissed her mother goodbye and stormed outside. While she was in the bus in her way to school, she took a better look of herself: she was wearing a pair of light blue pants with a light green tank top and her silver high sandals.

‘Lovely…’

When she arrived at school everybody was staring at her weirdly, no wonder, ‘The Haruno Sakura’ was always in and yet here she was wearing an amazing combination of outfits… (A.N :BLUE AND GREEN DO NOT MATCH FOR GODS SAKE!!)

Not far from there a hyperactive blond was laughing loudly and hysterically at something her friends said making everyone in at least 40 feet away covering their ears, closing their eyes and sighing annoyed not boring to turn around knowing exactly who it was. The blond spotted Sakura and with an ‘eek!!’, ran towards her dragging her friends behind. When she was in about 20 feet from her she screamed ‘SAKURA-HUGE-Fore….’ – she trailed off realizing what Sakura was wearing.

‘What the hell is that??’ – She asked when she got near her with a disgusted face.

‘Not today, Ino-pig… I’m in a terrible mood’ – said Sakura resting her hand on her forehead-not-so-big-anymore and closing her eyes.

‘But, but…’ – Ino protested but Sakura had already walked off to the entrance of the school. In her way to the entrance, Sakura tripped over a stick (A.N: REALLY big stick...), stumbled and hit a little kid who fell right in his face, Sakura turned around to apologize but instead she hit Ms. Beau, the photocopies lady, who was carrying a large pile of papers, the lady screamed and fell right on her butt. Sakura watched, mouth hanging open, at Ms. Beau pissed face, the little kid who stormed crying to near his friends and at the papers covering the school courtyard floor. Well, you can guess what happened afterwards: detention.

Yes, definitely the day wasn’t going well for the pink haired teenager.
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MensagemAssunto: Re: Detention - SasuSaku   Ter Nov 10, 2009 9:02 pm

Cheeee....

Esta foi a fic mais horrível e estúpida que já li.... xD

Estou a brincar, amiga, já a tinha lido à muito. Very Happy

Devias era ter posto algo em Português, mas pronto.

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MensagemAssunto: Re: Detention - SasuSaku   Ter Nov 10, 2009 9:06 pm

Tixa escreveu:
Cheeee....

Esta foi a fic mais horrível e estúpida que já li.... xD

Estou a brincar, amiga, já a tinha lido à muito. Very Happy

Devias era ter posto algo em Português, mas pronto.

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Logo vi que tinhas que ser tu a comentar a minha fanfic primeiro...-.- Sim já a tinhas visto... E tu sabes que não me ajeito a escrever fanfics em Português. Rolling Eyes
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MensagemAssunto: Re: Detention - SasuSaku   Qua Nov 11, 2009 11:36 am

Seixa666 escreveu:
(A.N :BLUE AND GREEN DO NOT MATCH FOR GODS SAKE!!)


Razz Gostei desse comentário.
Muito boa a fanfic! Agora tens é de postar rápido o resto!
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MensagemAssunto: Re: Detention - SasuSaku   Qua Nov 11, 2009 2:36 pm

Spoiler:
 


Última edição por Kakashi em Qua Nov 11, 2009 3:23 pm, editado 1 vez(es) (Razão : informações do manga na secção errada)
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MensagemAssunto: Re: Detention - SasuSaku   Qua Nov 11, 2009 2:40 pm

aCarolinaInfante escreveu:
Eu não sei se sabem , mas o que a Sakura disse ao Naruto era pura mentira . Não se notou logo ?

Sim muita gente já referiu isso mesmo.... e eu espero bem que seja!

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MensagemAssunto: Re: Detention - SasuSaku   Qui Nov 12, 2009 4:06 pm

DeathWhisper escreveu:
Seixa666 escreveu:
(A.N :BLUE AND GREEN DO NOT MATCH FOR GODS SAKE!!)


Razz Gostei desse comentário.
Muito boa a fanfic! Agora tens é de postar rápido o resto!


Obrigada!! ^^

Vou postar o próximo assim que puder! Smile
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MensagemAssunto: Re: Detention - SasuSaku   Sab Nov 14, 2009 11:16 am

DeathWhisper escreveu:
aCarolinaInfante escreveu:
Eu não sei se sabem , mas o que a Sakura disse ao Naruto era pura mentira . Não se notou logo ?

Sim muita gente já referiu isso mesmo.... e eu espero bem que seja!

Spoiler:
 
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Eu tambem espero bem que seja mentira! U_U

A Sakura ama é o Sasuke,sempre amou desde criança, nao agora que ia ''mudar''
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MensagemAssunto: Re: Detention - SasuSaku   Dom Nov 15, 2009 11:31 pm

Mãezinha... O Off-topic que para aqui vai... u.u

Pelo menos comentavam a fic da miúda. >.>

BTW: Tu ajeitas-te a escrever em Português sim! Tens é preguiça de mexer esse ass. Razz

Mete lá o próximo capítulo. Wink
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MensagemAssunto: Re: Detention - SasuSaku   Seg Nov 16, 2009 4:25 pm

Tixa escreveu:
Mãezinha... O Off-topic que para aqui vai... u.u

Pelo menos comentavam a fic da miúda. >.>

BTW: Tu ajeitas-te a escrever em Português sim! Tens é preguiça de mexer esse ass. Razz

Mete lá o próximo capítulo. Wink


Apoiada! XD Deviam tar aqui a comentar a minha fic e metem-se a falar não sei so quê...

PS: Não me ajeito não! Neutral
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MensagemAssunto: Re: Detention - SasuSaku   Seg Nov 30, 2009 4:41 pm

.......................................................................................................Capítulo II...............................................................................................

It was 07:30am and Uchiha Sasuke was already on his way to school, like always. He didn’t leave too far away so he could go by foot and get there in time.

‘Good morning, Sasuke!!’

‘AHHH!! Who the hell are you??’

‘Aaah… I almost forgot how friendly you are…’

‘Ha, ha, very funny… Now get out of my HEAD!!’

‘Sorry… Can’t do that… I’m your conscience’

‘…’

‘Sasuke…?’

‘You’re kidding, right?’

‘I wish! You don’t know how annoying it’s to hear your thoughts!’

‘You hear my thoughts??’

‘’Course I do! And I must say: I’m impressed…’

‘A-About what?’

‘How your thoughts don’t change very much… It’s pretty boring, you know? Kill Itachi, training, Sakura, Sakura, Sakura, kill Itachi, Sakura, Sakura, training… ‘

'W-what are you talking about? I don’t think about Sakura! ... That much…’ – really, REALLY, small blush.

‘Look!’

‘What?’

‘It’s Sakura!!’

‘Where??’ - Looks everywhere like a crazy maniac.

‘Hahahaha!! Never thought you would fall for that!!’

‘Ha, ha! Very funny…’

‘I know, I know…Oh! Look! Now it’s really Sakura’

‘Oh, no! I won’t fall for that again!!’

‘I’m serious! Look!’

It was true, Sakura was exiting the bus. Sasuke was about to say something, but he spotted a green spot flying past him in her direction. Sasuke knew instantly who he was.

‘My beautiful cherry goddess! How beautiful you look today!! Wearing the youthful color of youth! Wait till I tell Gai sensei about this!! Have a youthful, bright and sparkling! morning!!’

With that he left to the school, leaving a trail of dust behind and a stupefied Sakura and an eye-twitching Sasuke.

‘Well… Was that weird or what…? Oh… Good morning Sasuke-kun!’ – said Sakura spotting Sasuke and giving him one of her bright smiles. Sasuke felt an unusual warmth on the left side of his chest and a unpleasant sensation on his stomach,

‘ I must be sick… I knew I shouldn’t have had that many tomatoes at that time of the morning…’

‘Hn’ – came the usual reply of the Uchiha. Still strangely angry at the Konoha’s Green Beast comment about Sakura.

Sasuke decided not to think about that and walked to the school entrance.

The classes went as normal to Sasuke: trying to pay attention to the teacher finding it very difficult since his friend Uzumaki Naruto was constantly blabbing about something. Though he wasn’t really paying attention, he could catch some words and it was evident that he was talking about something that included ramen and Hinata. In the middle of the class, Sasuke found himself staring at Sakura who was on his right, listening carefully to whatever the teacher was saying and taking notes.

‘Why am I looking at her??’

‘Because she is b-e-a-utiful!!’

‘You again??’

‘You can’t get rid of me that easily’

‘Ugh! Why am I feeling this way? She’s nothing special…’

‘Yeah right… Tell me something that you don’t like in her’

‘Well, for starts, her pink hair is unnatural, she’s a blabbing mouth, she screams too damn loud and she’s a fan girl!!’

‘I said something that you don’t like in her, not everything you like about her!’

‘What do you mean?’

'I mean that you love her pink hair, the way it flies with the wind, the way it looks so much like strawberry bubblegum, how it smells like strawberry and how amazingly soft it looks. ( Sasuke was wearing a pretty pink blush) You love when she blabs like that, the way her wonderful looking tasting rosy lips move when she talks about everything and anything. ( By now Sasuke was bright red) You love the way she screams your name and you know she’s not as fan girl as she was and you feel bad about it cause you now that you loved how she gave all her attention to you and only you.’ ( By the end of Inner Sasuke speech, Sasuke was as red as his beloved tomatoes).

‘Well? Am I right or what?’

Sasuke didn’t get to answer ‘cause the bell rang and finally the class was over and he could get rid of his annoying inner. He went peacefully to his locker… only to find another one even more annoying and weird.

‘Salutations, Uchiha-san!’

‘Oh god!’

‘Have you seen my youthful cherry blossom?’

Sasuke’s insides twisted like mad.

‘His cherry blossom?? Hischerry blossom ?!’

Though Sasuke’s insides were still twisting like crazy, he tried his best to look like his natural self.

‘No’ – he replied simply.

‘Oh, what a shame… I thought I could ask her to go get some ramen with me… Do you think she would say yes? Of course she would… Then we could-‘

Sasuke’s hands were turning into fists very slowly…

‘-go to a walk in the park, you know, holding hands, then we could sit in a bench, her head on my shoulder, then-‘

Lee was speaking more to himself then to Sasuke whose body was shaking like hell.

‘- I would look into her eyes and tell her how beautiful she is and I would crept closer and we would share a youthful kiss of love!!’

Lee finished his speech with his eyes sparkling with joy. Sasuke was… Well, how should I put this… Literally fuming.

‘Uchiha-san…?

Sasuke was looking at Lee with his eyes crimson like blood, his body shaking with angry.

Lee looked curious, then understanding, then terrified. He tried to run, really he did, but an immensely jealous and angry Uchiha is impossible to stop.

Sasuke punched Lee like he never punched anyone. Lee went flying like a meteorite crashing on the lockers on the other side of the corridor, not before, of course, hitting pour Ms. Beau who was carrying the very same pile of papers recently caught by Sakura. She fell yet again on her butt and the perfectly piled pile of papers went flying everywhere.

‘UCHIHA SASUKE!! DETENTION!!’


Segundo capítulo!!! ^^ Obrigada a todos pelos comments!! Very Happy
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MensagemAssunto: Re: Detention - SasuSaku   Seg Nov 30, 2009 6:16 pm

Razz Simplesmente adorei este capítulo, mal posso esperar pelo último!
A "consciência" do Sasuke é bastante divertida!
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MensagemAssunto: Re: Detention - SasuSaku   Ter Dez 01, 2009 8:58 am

Muito bom Seixa xD, o que me ri com a consciencia do Sasuke Very Happy.
Continua com isso xD, quando se fala na Sakura o Sasuke olha para todos os lados como um maniaco hahahah
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MensagemAssunto: Re: Detention - SasuSaku   Qui Dez 03, 2009 3:04 pm

Obrigadaaaaa!!!! ^^ Vocês são o máximo!!! Very Happy

Vou postar assim que possivel o ultimo!
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MensagemAssunto: Re: Detention - SasuSaku   Sex Dez 04, 2009 8:51 am

Tu fazes estes trabalhos e nos e que somos o maximo? Evil or Very Mad
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